Linda is a moron and she knows about all the rape in WWE

Most of these aren’t errors. How utterly pathetic.

That's a lot of question marks for (((corrections))) sounds more like the person who marked it up was petty and retarded.

There are more errors of correction than actual errors. Petulance and ignorance in extremis.

She's the secretary of education.

This is getting really embarrassing on Harvard’s behalf.

harvard wins by acting like a twitter karen

YASSKWEEN

Did you even review their notations? It’s comic. Most of these are not errors. Most are just preference in style.

WHy is a corpse charge of anything?

None of these things that are marked up are real errors, just the musing of an areogant cunt. Someone with no argument to make marks grammar instead of responding to the content. This is an admission of defeat.

Big lips and black skin detected.

arrogant*

I'm going to play stupid and assume you used a word in a different context than what is written

that different context I'm assuming you used is wrong

checkmate

Yep, Harvard won, lol. Look how fucking mad these monkeys are.

No you can't those have been written and reused by colored students for the past 50 years.

Just in: Harvard president loves huffing his own farts. News at 11.

The average college loan that’s being defaulted on was 30,000 dollars, what is the point of college if that small amount of money is enough to bury you after the fact?

No you can't, it's racist to do that to Harvard students

Linda is a moron and she knows about all the rape in WWE

Was she there in the Summer of 1992?

The investigation into Vince was dropped the day before Linda's confirmation hearing and they didn't consult with the grand jury at all before doing so for fucks sake

Harvard nitpicks grammatical choices that aren't too bad

if a black student wrote this way on their application letter it would be hailed to the moon

Dumbass cant recognize a typo
Retard detected. Thats F71.0 for your insurance records.

and then one day for no reason at all harvards tax exempt status dissapeared

can't*

Wow, harvard fails to understand the difference between a speech and essay-incredible.

And it earned the fags exactly $0.00.

I knew modern Harvardies were petty but this is peak childless woman.

Just a further admission of your stupidity. Keep goin i dont even need to break out real bait for you, just a hook.

and?

social media really pulled the curtains back on the "Professional World™"

First error

the use of “largely”. Which is completely appropriate and in no way an error.

Second “error”

stock vs flow. A completely arbitrary citation that’s both irrelevant and essentially semantic. In this instance, the Harvard twat is questioning the basis for the tabulation of a given nation’s gdp. Get real.

Third

comma omitted after yet. This has been debated and either way is acceptable.

Fourth

criticizes bracketing with quotation marks. This is a very common device. Italics could be used instead. But again, either way is acceptable and equally correct.

Fifth

systemic vs systematic. Okay, final a legit mistake. Systemic is not the correct word in this context.

Sixth

the sentence with a closing clause set off by a hyphen. I suppose I agree with Harvard here. Not really the crispest construction. The sentence should have each clause separated by a semicolon or each clause should be a separate sentence.

Seventh

’among many more’. Okay, Harvard is basically correct here as well. That sentence should be completely rewritten. It should be written thusly: These, among other questions, must be addressed. (The sentence should be split into two, or completely refashioned. It’s a run on sentence with an awkward clause spliced in its midst). Second sentence: actually, on second thought, there is no need for a second sentence. The first is not only a run-on, it’s redundant. Harvard’s critique of this sentence is in all ways valid. I have to admit.

Eight

the error identified with “we ask”. Once again, Harvard is correct in this case as well. If anything, they were fairly polite. That is very poor construction.

That’s enough for me. I take it back. There are some major errors of grammar, syntax and construction here. But it’s still petty.

Fair enough, Harvard. But be ye warned. You keep this up, and I’ll start shredding opinions issued from the benches of certain judges. Two can play at this game.

These aren't corrections, faggot. This is pious, "I wouldn't write it that way so it's incorrect because I'm an academic" tantrum throwing.

McMahon's finger is on the tap of their $8 billion. If they ever want to see that money they should consider taking a meeting to discuss the costs and benefits of growing the fuck up.

cringe

and she knows about all the rape in WWE

I mean, no shit? Pretty much everyone did.

Did she use A1 to write that letter?

BULLDOZE CAMBRIDGE. START AGAIN.
THESE FUCKING KIKES TOOK MY GIRLFRIEND FROM ME

Now let's see the applications from their black students

I appreciate this review. Thank you for the shallow and easy digestible analysis. Conclusion, both are fuckwits and somehow you and I get the shaft.

I like trains

Most of those aren't even valid grammatical criticisms, but stylistic/scholastic ones. I'd love to see them do the same to one of their nigger applicant's admissions essay.

Go find a Batista fig, queernog.

Why limit it to applicants? Let's see them do it to seniors in the English department

Actually, their identification of “largely” as an error is completely accurate. Their endowment is not “largely” tax free, it is tax free.

Okay, Harvard, I take it back. Most of the errors you pointed out are fairly significant. Even so, I maintain that this is tacky and petulant.

Kek.

To be fair, it definitely is a very poorly written letter, but it's not due to the grammar.

That's why she's perfect to be around kids and Trump. She'll keep her mouth shut like all women should.

harvard is a 60 billion dollar kike investment hedgefund we dont need to be giving them tax shekels

Wife interviewed someone who went to Harvard a decade ago. His qualifications were: I went to Harvard. His personality: I went to Harvard.

Most of them don't even appear to be grammatical errors, they're just some obnoxious "you should phrase this more better" comments made by the pretentious DEI cunt who marked it up. I didn't read the whole thing, but the few that I did look at before quitting in disgust were all like that.

Exactly.

I did and they were a bunch of assholes even back then (45 years ago, yes I'm old), which is why I transferred to a school that actually focused on educating its students.

meaningless performance

It's a leftoid, all right.

academics prove they are pedantic

wowzers

A secretary that can't spell isn't a problem?

nope, this is amerika we can do whatever we liek

who cares, harvard lets blacks get by with legitimately shit grammar all the time, and this letter is fine

get back to me when american education is actually about educating, rather than nigger worship and anti-american faggotry. the fact that they got a mildly worded letter instead of being publicly executed is a real shame.

those jews will be holding their butts if they lose tax-empty status and federal funding.

I looked at it for a few seconds and the three "corrections" I saw were literally just false. It circled "yet and said "Conjugation?", what the fuck does marking the word Yet and asking if you meant to conjugate it mean? It's literal nonsense.

They then marked "Systemic" and said "systematic?". No bitch they meant "systemic" as in "you're riddled with this bullshit like a disease".

What a bad look for Harvard lmao

post yfw Trump targets the APA and MLA because Harvard critiqued one of his loyalist's letters

Next step could be retaliatory student loan forgiveness, where universities not abiding by certain policies are considered fraudulent actors that must repay students if they were forced to take certain unnecessary, politically biased courses for their graduation.

These "corrections" remind me of how that nigger kept shouting "Grounz!" without knowing what he was talking about.

Do you think vinny mac ever took a shi on her forehead too?

There weren't misspellings that I saw. Almost entirely grammatical errors and picky ones at that.
Basically your 10th grade English teacher that can't stand not using her red pen.

Deregister them and make their degrees worthless

Worse, a lot of those 'corrections' are wrong.
t. mom was professional editor for a non-fiction publishing company.
Harvard is an embarrassment.

None of these are actual grammatical or spelling mistakes. They are all issues of preferred style. If you want to be a cunt, you can complain about using a coordinting conjunction at the beginning of a sentence without a semi-colon, but no one follows this rule anymore. It's ironic that Harvard would enforce largely arbitrary "fixed" grammatical rules while allowing DEI students to use ebonics and embracing alternative grammatical systems. This shit is exactly why Harvard needs to receive zero federal funding.

Daily reminder Harvard & other institutions were targeted by the administration only after its students were protesting things such as Israel & Palestine.

Clown world

It circled "yet" and said "Conjugation?"

Which is also ironic, because the handwriting used is so messy that it's easy to misread their spelling as "conjugation" instead of "conjunction." They were bitching about using a coordinating conjunction in a sentence separate from the thought being connected. It's beyond fucking stupid. I guarantee no less than 99% of Harvard research papers published in the last year contain the same "mistake."

Good move by Harvard. Having barely literate celebs in key positions of power isn't a good idea, this specially applies to the President.

harvard did not markup the letter though

get off twitter already

Alot of the lefts arguement is they are better students type.

Only perpetual children would stick with that arguement as adults cus its so lame.

If you argue as a kid does, no you cant be in control of the adult world

Conjuuction

No, it's a great idea. The elite's reaction alienates the common person and fosters anger towards the university, gathering wider support for the cessation of government funding.

I actually thought it was the first ever funny leftist meme, which is a worrying development lol

its literally made up by some random twitter account to bait "the common person"

you will not find this posted on any harvard social media accounts

conjuucrion junction, whats your fuuuuuuuunction

for me its alcoholism

Rape in WWE

Grammer Nazis are just Karens.

None of the feedback is reasonable. Really look at it. It's made to be a shocking blurry thumbnail that people share without reading.

America would be better off without Harvard. We should burn that place to the ground.

that fateful summer of '92

I would send Harvard all further responses in crayon giving Harvard their due respect. None.

What’s even more hilarious about this is that I’m a humanities PhD in a mid-rate Midwestern university, I got approved for a whole academic year’s worth of funding from a Department of Education program, and my acceptance letter told me not to even take that acceptance for granted, since the executive branch could still strike the funding appropriation down before next semester begins. If that program ends, there’s a good chance that a lot of the students in my program can’t continue.

Lots of nervous international students who don’t know if their visas will cancel on them before they can return to the US after seeing family during the summer, rumors are going around that a few from our school have already been deported. Pajeet slaves run our cafeterias, and the administration is cutting down on pretty much everything except computer science and business degrees, any departments without undergrad programs are getting cut or merged with bigger departments. I just turned 30, I might be getting serious with a spergy pajeeta three years older than me who’s a PhD in machine learning and probably might make more money than me if we do tie the knot, and I have no fucking idea what’s going on with my life, much less the wider world. But fuck it, undaunted we blunder on, it’s quite a timeline to be alive in whatever happens

Harvard writes "so-called"

Linda circles it and writes "use of 'so-called'"

A regular Ben Garrison

Came here to post this.

Harvard cringe